Thursday 30 August 2012

Free Writing

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One day there was a boy named Jake who lived with his Mum, his Dad and his brother Kobie. His brother was his best friend. They are always up to mischief. You can always tell when they are doing something naughty. They would always go for adventures, up mountains, through jungles and in mysterious caves. So one day they had nothing to do and thought they would go for an adventure. So they thought and thought of something to do. Suddenly they had an idea. So they asked there Mum and went out traveling. A couple of hours later they were in somewhere they had never seen somewhere where small things were big and big things were small. They wondered where they were. Another couple of hours later they still could not find a way out of there and it started to get a bit mysterious and scary. They thought how would this place change in just a day because it use to be jungle but now its like a maze?
To be continued. 

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