Writing Activity

W.A.L.T Use commas when writing a list in our story's. I have highlighted the sentence that have the commas.


In the holidays my brother Kobie, Josh, Ben and I went to the Splash Centre. When we got there we got a hydro slide pass and then went to go in the pool. After we jumped out of the pool and went down the hydro slide. We all went down at the same time. After we went to the Splash Centre we went to Kowhai park. As soon as we got there we went on the Flying fox, the train and then went to the bowl with our scooters. Then we went back home to have some afternoon tea. We had a cookie, some water, fruit and a bit of cake. After that we went back home and played soccer.