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One day there was a someone called Jake who lived in a mountain called Ze-da-gon the most dangerous mountain in the world. Inside the mountain it was exactly like a Jungle except there were Terradaptle's, T-rex's and all sorts of dinosaurs. Jake lived in a bamboo house with all sorts of cool things like a queen sized bed and he even had his own 42 inch plasma tv screen. So back to the story Jake was going for a walk in the jungle trying to find some fruit when he saw a huge big fat orange thing sitting in the way of the banana tree. He got a stick and pocked it once twice three times, suddenly it moved then he came closer not knowing that it was a   huge snake. Then he finally noticed. Chasing him through the jungle was a terrifying orange slimy python with poisoning fangs and scary red eyes. Jake had to hurry away is well as find a spot where the snake will not be able to get him. Then Jake saw a huge big long tree. Jake thought that if he could quickly climb up the tree the terrifying snake wouldn't get him. So he got up to the top and had a look down but he couldn't see the snake. He thought he might take a risk and climb down. When he got down he had a look around but there was no sign of any thing so he walked home. He sure was hungry but at least he was safe at home. In the morning he woke up and had apple and peach porridge his favorite. Then he went out to go get some fruit again. This time there was no big fat orange slimy snake with terrible red eyes. So all was calm in fact to calm. He got his bananas and strawberries and walked home. When he got home he did the dishes only hearing the sound of the birds chatting to each other. When he had  done his dishes he went for a walk. Still all was calm. He walked further and further away from his home but it was ok cause he knew the jungle back to front. Suddenly he herd a rumble a roar, the volcano was going to errupte in a couple of hours Jake had to run home and get out of the volcano...
To be continued.